That was good, got a 4
Very nice job. I wasn't sure what to expect up until when he gave her the worm (that can be taken more than one way).
That was good, got a 4
Very nice job. I wasn't sure what to expect up until when he gave her the worm (that can be taken more than one way).
Not too bad
It would have been better if you had showed what happened during the fight scene. If you make this longer and show the fighting, this would be a good movie. Oh yeah, excellent job on your first flash.
Thank you! Don't worry, there will be plenty of ninja death to go around soon enough ;) I've got everything planned out well.
Creepy
Kind of cool, yet creepily gothic. Kind of nice, yet delightfully scary. In other words, nice job. The graphics weren't very smooth, but that is something that will improve over time.
That was hilarious..
Great job. I thought that this was hilarious. I didn't think that it would be good at first, but that was great. The graphics were really good, the animation was smooth. Keep it up, I can't wait to see more like this.
Looks cool
If you finished this, I think that it would be pretty cool. The trailer could have standed to be longer, though. There was only one scene, and the bullet didn't even hit the guy. LOL. Great choice of music, that was a big plus.
Thanks, yeah. I watched the trailer again. and it does move slow. The movie won't be as slow.
This really needs some work
For one, the people didn't even move when they were running. They just kind of floated across the floor, I thought that was kind of poor. The graphics could really use some touch ups, they are in dire need.
Not too bad
But why is there a tombstone telling them to rest in peace? That is the only part that I don't get. Otherwise, this was pretty cool, and think that it would make a really cool E-card to send to people.
That's the whole gig with their "undying love..." Johnny and Susie died twenty-two years ago, but they still perform the same ritual every year. That's why they turn that turquoise color and fade away, and the gravestone is shown where they were sitting with the rose he gave her; they're dead, but they come back every Valentine's Day and have a little smoochy smoochy.
*shrugs* It worked better in my head than it did on paper... but what else is new, eh? :)
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